The main criticism is to look at real life anatomy. The main thing is that his arms and torso are way too long and his legs are too short.

Search google for an image of the pose you wanna do and copy the pose

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This is awesome! D8 You guns, your wall.. you you.. D8 its awesome!

(I fail at walls and guns and such lol )

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~the-doodle-queen*thelonelyqueen~the-sweet-queen

My Sexi
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Alright, Thank you! ^_^

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William Fox(c)WilliamTheFox

I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior. And I'm not scared to admitt it either


Icon was made from pic that was made by: ~punkaoi

Thank you!
hehe That's ok, all it is practice ^_^

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William Fox(c)WilliamTheFox

I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior. And I'm not scared to admitt it either


Icon was made from pic that was made by: ~punkaoi

its that picture that kept on interupting the convo! >:U will that snoop!

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the awesome ones
~the-doodle-queen~thelonelyqueen=eeveelover84

i cried happy tears when my charmeleon evolved into charizard in my first ever pokemon game.

XDD You that's him alright! And Thanks for the fav!

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William Fox(c)WilliamTheFox

I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior. And I'm not scared to admitt it either


Icon was made from pic that was made by: ~punkaoi

You changed his tail,right?
As for criticisim,the legs are too short,and the torso and arms are a bit too long.The head as well,seems kinda small,i know they arent gigantic,but compared to everything else,it should be a bit bigger.

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If you look at me as just another girl,thats all you'll see,is another happy little girl.But fi you look at me,with concern,you'll see a broken child.

Yes I made his tail a lot longer and fluffier, there are 2 more things that I changed about William ^_^ And Thank you for the crit.

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William Fox(c)WilliamTheFox

I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior. And I'm not scared to admitt it either


Icon was made from pic that was made by: ~punkaoi

I was going to write a critique but I realized it's a member's only benefit... but I won't let that stop me!

Imagery, intense action, and precise detail are all offered in this impressive scene drawn by our talented William. As mentioned, he has had trouble portraying shading but this drawing offers how much he has really improved. The shading is fantastic, you can see the how the sun plays a role in this and it offers a more realistic edge. William's expression is amazing, he looks ready for action. The bullet looks almost metallic, and adds a little extra this this scene. All in all, William does an excellent job and treats us to another one of his amazing drawings.

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Always Try To Capture The Moment